Do you really want to bother with the continuation of posting threads about your songs if the threads just get locked in the end anyways?
Sorry that your thread was locked mate, but your last song's remake wasn't half bad. You're getting better, and the fact that assholes on this server don't understand that you just want to progress as a musician is terrible. Just keep trying, and take as many music classes as you can, because they'll help in the long run.
Mind terribly if I take a mental shit on your profile? Or would my constructive criticism be too much for the likes of you?
Please stop torturing us with the TL;DR threads/posts and the exact same songs over and over again, especially when they suck.